Eeeeeeew, yuck. I noted quite a number of errors. Hope you don't mind my picky proofreading. First one: Why didn’t Ted didn’t. I believe there are several more (wish I'd copied and pasted as I read), but I'm too lazy to read it all over again. Look forward to the final installment.
I knew what Chris getting at. / Their match didn’t last long. / and transferred it placed to /
A few more you might wish to modify.
Eeeeeeew, yuck. I noted quite a number of errors. Hope you don't mind my picky proofreading. First one: Why didn’t Ted didn’t. I believe there are several more (wish I'd copied and pasted as I read), but I'm too lazy to read it all over again. Look forward to the final installment.